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Sunday, August 7, 2016

Qwrite mon 2016 term 3 week 3

The crooked chaos!

Can I trust this bridge? I looked over my shoulder, blood red eyes staring at me. I knew that I had to cross the bridge, and quickly,I dashed with a quick sprint. A cheetah pounced onto the bridge and the crooked bridge fell,the cheetah dropped into the filthy water like a rain drop. It was catching up to me while I was clinging onto the bridge. I was almost there, I leaped onto the other Island just in time for the bridge to finish it's fall. I had no way to get back...

1 comment:

  1. Wow William, you set the scene perfectly. I could see what was happening.

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