Writing Narrative

Learner: William                          Learning Coach: Mr Hattie                Date: 4 July 2016

Learning Area: Learning Habitat 1 - Writing

Learning Observed

For writing this term William have been focusing on persuasive writing. He has been developing his Capabilities about this type of writing by learning what the idea of persuasive writing is and how to give points and examples that help persuade their readers.William has been able to provide evidence to help explain his point. He has good control of his sentence varieties and has been developing his Capabilities with provide detail which allows the read to inference the meaning of his point rather than saying it. William has been enjoy Collaborating with his peers when writing by discussing his points of view and why he thinks this.

Evidence of learning

William has attempted to use paragraphs. He will be focusing on these more.

Next Learning Steps

William next learning steps are: Describe the writing so that it paints a picture in the reader's head. Use paragraphs to show new ideas.